Akatsuki System in Another World - Reviews

Machigai ya shippai wa seikō no chance

She wanted to break away from him, but she couldn't. Something bound her to him, so tightly that it hurt every time she forced herself to look away.

Tarika tarika....untung bojomu sabar

Yet the man seemed to have supernatural reflexes. He avoided the direct hit to his heart and shifted his weight so the dagger only struck his shoulder. His next action was to call upon the ether, but Mutallu was no slouch either. Balls of fire crashed into the man, burning his hair and skin.

"Puh! Stop struggling, you're only prolonging your defeat." Lance spat out blood.

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"Bastard you are with him aren't you? We will kill you as well" said the fat fishmen and emran towards Stuart and Usopp followed behind by his mates.

I need to get myself away from this place

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

I need to get myself away from this place

Everything is just top-notch from writing quality to character descriptions to the feels and emotions. When reading a shifter story the audience needs to have this emotional connection which the story is providing in abundance. Also, I dislike abusive toxic MLs and Ranon is far from that, loving what a green flag he is. That's the truth definition of being strong, to take care of the weak and not abuse. This story has all the elements of becoming top-tier, keep writing dear author and good luck for the competition. I am rooting for you.

this is my first time writing a story here , i hope youll support me until the end thank you , this is a wonderful journey of a knight who would not die named jhonathan