A new life of a boy (working title) - Reviews

This book it is really interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter.Really Really Good Book.

Girls and hopeless romantic introverted guys would love to read this............................................... dots for 140 characters

"[ Cloak ] skill activated, one-time use. Time limit, 10 minutes. 250 points have been deducted from the original point storage."

9 Realms for body cultivation:

after talking to Anna I walked over to the cafe wich is a block down from the school I work there every day after school hey kiddo lori said as I walked in she was like an older sister to me she always were cute things today's outfit was sparkly shoes pink pants and a yellow tank top  she looked extra excited wich scared me we have a new worker lori said and...I was hoping you'd...show bnb him around lori asked look ok ng so hopeful she had to catch up on work so I agreed she clapped he should be here and minute now lori said the bell rang to the door and to my surprise I saw....

"Yes, I have to help an acquaintance in an experiment," Alexander replied.

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You'll never know if you don't go (go!)

"Mini!! what happened ? your hand is bleeding!! some one get the first-aid box ? Mini come with me to my Cabin" (Chif)

Its a really nice book! I like the magic, its cool, and the book as a whole is attention-grabbing too! Its really well rounded, and I also espically like the title, because its so spiky and cool to look at. and I kinda want to be in a pirate attack, but I live in the middle of a city, so that would be weird. Whoever reads this, why did you waste your time looking at this pointless review. Have a good day!

Me and my small team what do you do? Want to know what you feel to think about the story so far and how the writing is please leave us reviews of any kind and telling us what can we work on?