A hard life. - Reviews

"If you fall. .we will all die!"

Deana wanted to give him a kick one more time. She just laughed, sounded like she was insulted by what he said.

Well, the years start coming and they don't stop coming

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?

Okay, so far 29 chapters in, I'm a bit confused, ik our protagonist, was in the wind kingdom getting some intimate action, but then it cut off to a whole different section out of nowhere. I'm unaware if this is just a flash back? but that wouldn't make sense, as our protagonist wasn't this knowledge of himself during that time prior to flash back. but it also doesn't seem like a jump to the future. idk maybe it'll be explained later or maybe I'm just misunderstanding something. overall though, I'm enjoying it.

It is good, in he starting it's just the pronunciation is the problem,Waiting for what will happen in the future chapters.