A generic love story - Reviews

In the shape of an "L" on her forehead

She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb

The ice we skate is getting pretty thin

Whatever mysterious force pulled him here dissipated as he arrived at the landmass on which the tree was stationed. Glancing up at the tree, Kamen felt indescribably drawn to it. From the outer edge of the island to the tree's base span quite a distance, but he walked regardless. As for extraneous matters like where he was, or what had happened he didn't really care at the moment.

Nice… good story … keep up the good work

"What would you like for breakfast Zalaria?" he still chewed lip and hoped she didn't notice.

I think that the book has a lot of potential. There are some typos and such here and there, but the story is well thought out and early hints pay off later with consistent rules so far for the universe. Maybe I will update this review later, but for now it has kept me interested and that by itself deserves praise.

As of chapter 2 I find the book very much fits my taste, I only hope that it continues that way. Aside from that, I encourage you all to read it as well

I'm loving this story at the moment the world is great and sucks you in story development is good quality is up there for WN all around i think this is a 4/5.