A Tale of Winter - Reviews

My world's on fire, how about yours?

"She was barely conscious when I found her, but she soon woke up. She took in everything quickly and got to work. She was still dazed, so I got her the supplies and set up the stones. She sure scared me when she cut herself though." Jones said, glancing over at her.

Great story with unique elements ,one of best story from my perspective

Short and sweet!! Finished in one sitting! Worth the time!

Nioh's a badass, even if he's a little full of himself.  His power over the waves is sick.  The action is non-stop, and the mystery of what happened to the world keeps you guessing. If you're a fan of seeing how things are built and appreciate some technical detail in your sci-fi, this is a good pick.

The creativity in this is remarkable, and I don't see much problems with the grammar. The plot is well-written, and keep up with the good work!