First of all, I must say this is a very well-written novel. The author clearly has a lot of talent when it comes to storytelling. The characters are well-designed, and the story is easy to follow. So far, there are only two chapters, but I am confident the upcoming ones will keep me entertained from beginning to end.The only issue I have is with the spacing between paragraphs, and the second chapter feels way too long. Despite this, I still give this work a solid 9/10.