A Dangerous Obsession - Reviews

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Cant wait for the next chapter  you are a very good writer

Sound effects blasted out of the sound system in the movie theatre. It was dark and cold. Luckily, I brought an extra sweater for Ambar so she wouldn't complain about the temperature here. Ambar was so fixated towards the huge screen in front of us that she didn't noticed our hands were linked together. She was munching on some caramel popcorn with one hand while the bucket laid on her lap. Even though she dressed casually, she still looks good. Of course, I would be bias. I would like anything she wears. Her hair is short, with the ends touching her shoulder. She used to have really long luscious hair that reach near her waist. She used to hate having a hair cut and would be adamant about leaving her hair long. "I would look more like a princess," she said when she was younger. I love her hair too. It's a shade of light brown which frames her petite face nicely. I touched her hair gently, brushing the ends of a piece of her hair. She looked at me curiously and then shrug, returning her attention to the movie. I smiled at her. The need to make her mine and be closer to her, is becoming more overwhelming as the day passes. I could say, I am on the brink of desperation, because Ambar is very oblivious to my feelings and I would have to be more straightforward towards her.

(victor): tumhe pata chal gaya hai tum kya kya kar shakte ho to kya tum mere sath kaam karoge partnar sheep mein.

I wake up in the morning and the first thing I see is this?

In the corner of my eye, I saw Baa-chan face palm.

He groan again and tried to shift his body to sit. But with little strength, he colapse back on the bed.

I’m actually very curious about your amazing story, can’t wait for more! <3

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paid

"The equipment is ready, Master." Jester said while looking down saluting.

This novel has very good grammar, it is pleasent to read and only suffers from slight repetition with certain words and sentences.The first 13 chapters are confusing and the action is somewhat hard to follow, but it sets up a background for future development, so please read all the free chapters before deciding to continue or not. Because the story is actually quite good so far and has lots of potential.Author i hope that you continue to include the other characters in a meaningful way, because i wory this will become a story where the mc is the only one capable of handling things. Such a story can quickly become boring and repetitive.Otherwise you are doing a good job, make sure there is character development as the story progresses.*I like how sirius actually cries a lot, since he is a kid that makes him realistic as well, some authors just make the mc emotionless beasts from the beginning.

On the contrary, this book is shown in the yuri genre. And thanks for this book.................................................................................................................................................................................