A Cripple's Journey to World Domination

I’m halfway through and I’m soooooo tempted to stop reading.  Inara’s thought process and actions are annoying!! I figure there’s redemption in the end, but OMG!!!!

This looks like an interesting story, but I feel the synopsis written on the first chapter shouldn't have been, but it's still up to you to consider taking it down, as it takes the excitement of mystery from the plot.

You've revealed all the plot in one chapter, making the story predictable now.

Although she still stood out because of her exceptional beauty and aura, to Christopher's group, she seemed less unapproachable after talking to her for a bit and just realised that she is a bit cold to those that she doesn't know or like.