A Briny Beginning - Reviews

The next day..

  Suddenly, I saw the most beautiful woman I see in my life crossing the street, almost being hit by a truck, by some strange impulse to save her, maybe because many people died in my life, I managed to jump and push her away of the road.

Recognizing them, he involuntarily said.

Mianhae ?

Bless : Aish.

He did not need to explain further. Lily clearly understood her status now. She was really a captive.  Mere human being, there was no way anyone would consider her a guest.  Her status was lower than the pets. At least, pets were granted the freedom to roam in this valley.

Well it's good so far. The author immersed us in the world and gives depth to the characters. Just one thing, your chapters should be more structured and not move from 500words to 1.7k in the next. Also, change the name to something more enticing. But still, good work author, recommendable book.