[Ori-GEN] - Reviews

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After sullen routines of digging nothing up and losing energy in return, Parch glanced at the far end of all the rocky ruins and noticed a soft orange light acting as a guide in the shadows.

The Khalif and his ministers continue to provide for us teachers in the Temple, and inquire as to the boy's development and capability. I do not know what to make of it: are they truly looking after the boy's welfare, or do they simply see him as a weapon being forged?

Then she coughed twice, taking my eyes from the giants-I say, from her beautiful eyes, and said, "I may not be allowed to see the thoughts of the chosen ones, but if you keep looking at my breasts, I will not even need to see your thoughts to know what you are thinking. "

*DING* REWARD = CHOOSE 5 ARMIES FROM ANY ANIME HOST HAS KNOWN TO BE HIS OWN ARMY.

"Kenji!" i called.

author anyway u could update more chapters, I'm hooked and wanna read more.

I find the concept very interesting and am looking forward to unraveling the mysteries you are building. It is really interesting that it is set in earth with the mythology and magic coming to life. The first chapter started very strong, then quickly the pace slowed down with the introduction of many different characters. It is only four chapters so far, so I am sure more will happen down the line. There are some grammar mistakes, but only in capitalization from what I can tell. The story also shifts scenes often which was difficult to follow when it happens every chapter. Overall I enjoyed it. I look forward to more.

This story is good and interesting .I love it. Thanks to the author and also to the translator who meticulously created this wonderful story.