[OLD] Over the Top: The Track to Fame
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https://www.webnovel.com/book/10652332406088605/Over-the-Top-%3A-The-Track-to-Fame

The entertainment world is a hard place to survive. Vying at its peak, people are retiring, backing off due to fear of failure. In an unseemingly new company which is about to decline, 7 boys enter its halls.
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This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events, locales, and incidents are either the products of the author’s imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.

All Rights Reserved.

Special Thanks to:
Logdesh, Ermory and SpaceIsLife

Written by Aeiara

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Each chapter is less than 500 characters.
Read a couple of chapters and nothing remotely interesting is happening.
No world building, no character dept. The only thing that we know is his age and dream.
Most of the chapters are like reading a movie script.
My advice. Pour more effort in each chapter, make it longer, more meaningful.
Your grammar is okey to read.
Instead of making a list of things to do, make it him saying what he needs to do, why and a backup plan if that doesn't work out(Don't you make it like that in your head in your daily life ?)
I will come back later, hope you fix the problems :)
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