56 HEROES - Reviews

"We will not understand because you're not telling anything! Protect?? You're trying to break everything Nat! which is more heavier , love or your friends !? " Lily said and walk away , she couldn't take it anymore , the lies.

the capital city always looks beautiful when at night. the glow of lights that emanate almost in every corner of the city, a car that flares past and around without endlessly adds to the impression of the beauty of the city of Jakarta, especially when seeing it from the top of the apartment building so anyone those who are there can freely view the vast expanse of sky with sparkling stars.

And suddenly the purple potion that after being mixed with the yellow potion turned into a dark black color.

Great read. I love the concept. It’s like fantasy meets “Gangs of New York”. A few repeat sentences but other than that excellent writing quality. The only thing that can stop this from being great is if it’s dropped prematurely or moves at a snails pace. Would love to see more frequent updates but life is a thing. The Author might not have the time to commit.

this a good one man. I hope you'll continue to give us more of it