Ivy returns to a town where the past is a ghost, and the present is a lie. In a place where nothing is as it seems, the truth is the most dangerous secret of all.
Pleases update author. I'm really enjoying it recently and love this kind of novel already. I hope you keep updating it and doesn't abandoned the story, I love to see this update again,
The story has potenital But you can't make a bunch of OP pover in novelHe is demon in human body and has a higest cultivatio grade And thats okey and niceBut the problem is sistemSistem is too muchAnd story development is too fast He has a strong body And has a seled meridians Its a good startBut he didint get hunted by king or sectAnd he is calamity There si a lot of thing that need do remake 1. Take a slover pace Dont go to fast with story 2. He is to smart He dosen't have a comon sense. Thats okey but later he went to mental sect way/where noting is explained 3. You have to litle desprition about some thingI read it till you did start with a systemI didint read it laterBut this is my honest optionI know that you are 13 old So dont take offens but take a slover pace and read some novelWach how other autors write ther novelAlso read a coment Trust me you can learn a lot Of cos read a good coment where readers a brutaly honest and a spamsMy native isitn english Do a dont wach a gramars As long a can read it and unerstandIm okeyDont take offens but i belive if you want to be a beter author Then you need to work a lot
No hate for the author but this is my honest review..Imma start with the character design.Other than MC, we dont really know about other character.We dont know if Mc has any family.We dont know if he is in a guild.We dont know a lot of thing to be short and im sure this can be solve with more chapter.(As currently writing this review,there are 13 chapter).So im giving this a 2 out of 5 stars.Secondly would be the worldbuilding.There is nothing explain about the world Mc live in.So i give it 1 out of 5 stars.Again there are not enough chapter as of currently to evaluate.After that would be story development.According to the author pace,except for a few force plot (such as Mc sense of guilt or the college girl awakening),the story are really solid.The only problem would be not enough chapter to evaluate the novel.I give this 4 out of 5 stars.Next would be the writing quality.Im not some kind of writer or any kind of figure that would put a heavy account on writing cus for me as long as it is readable than it is good enough.I give this 5 out of 5 stars.Lastly there is update stability.There is only 13 chapter so the update is frequent.All i hope is author would not suddenly decide to go MIA when the novel reach chapter 70 - 80++.I give this 5 out of 5 stars.
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