(BL) Friendship On Fire - Reviews

"Ah to think I'd have a need for this old thing, but I guess this little kid is meant to inherit this after all" The Pill King said with a wry smile on his face, he observed the chamber for a little while then left the room.

Pretty simple huh, all I have to do is appeal to whoever is seeing this, hopefully the person who is writing won't kill me because of it lol.

the virtual worlds.

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I must say, it was a refreshing read. I love a feisty lady, and Eve delivers just that. The story is nice. The story is just getting started, but it is already captivating. Looking forward to Eve and Damian building their relationship with that attitude.

Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.

so far even tho it's only 3 chapters in as of writing this, it's looking pretty good and it's funny aswell. the background and world building is pretty sold so is the writing/spelling which is what I Determine to be most important. so far it's pretty good.