[Abandoned] - Reviews

Ellen took the necklace and gave a small smile to Amara in appreciation.  

"Kau akan menyesal cari pasal dengan aku, Melissa," Neil Ayden Raeqal bergumam sendirian. Emosinya kini sangat terganggu. Dengan berita kematian Hazel, kini, diarah pula untuk berkahwin dengan Melissa. Jika dia tidak dapat Hazel, Melissa pun tidak berhak untuk mengambil alih kedudukan gadis itu di dalam hidupnya.

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"When did I get this affinity…" Bria's head tilted to the side slightly before chuckling a little. Did she gain an affinity after almost getting killed by a magic trap? Pursing her lips slightly she would look around the room, her toes wiggling a bit.

After loading for a few seconds, the system ask for permission in using the camera, for it's a major key in playing IRL Adventure I gave permission of course. And then it start with a "WELCOME to IRL Adventure" and then the camera open up with icons on the side panel of the screen, "What the heck!" I inwardly curse, an envelope suddenly appear at the top screen poaition at the middle.

This book is an absolute delight to read! From the first line, the action pulled me in. It felt like I was watching a really good action movie. The author's writing style is so clear, detailed and easy to follow - it paints a clear picture in your head as you read. And Draven - his character is so fun that he makes you laugh every step of the way! Draven's dialogue lines are so fluid and his personality consistent, it feels like I'm interacting with a real person who is both charismatic and annoying (but in a charming way that makes you laugh!). Can't wait to see how Draven climbs to the strongest rank.

So what I’m reading confirms that the characters are African, which threw me off because the book cover is asian characters. Maybe try updating the cover with art that represent the characters so it would be easier to visualize the main characters. Otherwise the story is very interesting and I’m looking forward to finishing the book.