*Remember, this review is based on the first 6 chapters*Constructive Criticism: It may be the style, and if that is so then this is a writing quality issue, since that is not clear, but otherwise these firat few chapters feel slightly lacking in character and plot developement... but otherwise a good start.;,;.Positive Feedback: I feel you did well in anything I did not mention above.;,;.Personal Feedback: This feels like a mix between multiple past novels I have read... if it is more like the ones I liked, I guarentee finishing this... if not then I will only guarentee continuing this until I can fully see that it is not for me.;,;.
